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ToshiroEnzeru
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PostSubject: Story   Fri Jan 14, 2011 9:56 pm

I have a hobby of writing short stories about ghosts and the paranormal. And I got of thinking about writing another story here soon. I have a couple of different ideas running through my head at the moment. Here is the main concept idea for it. Let me know what you guys think, okay?

The Yearbook

"A transfer student moves from the city to a small town. Moves in with her aunt and cousin. Loves photography, decided to join the yearbook to make some friends. Was asked to put away some older year books, started to look through and noticed that a female student that was in a few of the books. Always in the third year students' class and couple years apart, her looks never changes."


I am still working on the char. names and trying to if it should take place. If anyone has any ideas feel free to tell me. I would love the help.
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PostSubject: Re: Story   Sat Jan 15, 2011 1:48 pm

That's a very interesting premise! I really like it Smile And I'd be glad to read!

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PostSubject: Re: Story   Sun Jan 16, 2011 6:42 pm

That sounds pretty cool!! I'd love to read it. I think that because the transfer student loves photography, you should maybe include something to do with her taking pictures and the girl is in them when they develop. Just a (kind of obvious) thought. When you finish the story please put it on here, I really wanna read it now. Could you maybe put some of your other stories on here aswell?? Smile Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Story   Sat Jan 22, 2011 11:11 pm

Sootica wrote:
That sounds pretty cool!! I'd love to read it. I think that because the transfer student loves photography, you should maybe include something to do with her taking pictures and the girl is in them when they develop. Just a (kind of obvious) thought. When you finish the story please put it on here, I really wanna read it now. Could you maybe put some of your other stories on here aswell?? Smile Smile

I saw playing around with that idea the girl showing up in the photos taken. I am still working on the char list for it as well. But once I get some done on it, I'll post some updates for. I'm still playing with the idea of being in Japan as well.
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PostSubject: Re: Story   Thu Feb 17, 2011 12:10 am

This sounds like a very good idea!
If you were to bring it into Japan would you be using many of the superstitions and legends that surround it??

I understand what you mean, character development and design are often hard to make. I usually have a problem with creating names for the characters, I will have everything else made but i can just not think of a good name.

Good luck with the story!
I hope you post it on here, either while you work or when its done, I would love to read it!

(If you need any help at all I can give you a hand. Very Happy)
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PostSubject: Re: Story   Mon Mar 14, 2011 5:27 pm

Definatly sounds interesting. Is is maybe a little Fatal Frame inspired? Still, I also write as a hobby, so I encourage you to work as hard as you can on this and post it when you have finished it.
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